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Now I'm telling about my best friend.His name is Bala and he was completed Engineering last year.He is living in Korrakodu. He is very kind person and handsome.First off all we met in Jalli palli ,this is a small village.
One day we went to friend marriage.that day I never forgot my life because I have seen a beautiful lady.And he is easily understand me, and very helpful.When I was at degree I need money because I pay fees that is last date,then I asked him the money he was arranged.He is very important to my life, and he gives best advises me.We meet weekly once .Then he is a claver as batsmen in cricket and always better than me
Now we are meet monthly once because he went for away .
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ReplyDelete-and he (0) completed HIS Engineering STUDIES last year.
-He is A very kind and handsome PERSON. (WO)
-One day we went to friend'S marriage. I WILL never FORGET THAT DAY (WO) IN my life because I SAW THE MOST beautiful lady.And he (WHO, YOUR FRIEND OR THE LADY? if it is your friend you need a new sentence not beginning with "and".
MY FRIEND easily understOOd me, and HE WAS very helpful.
When I was STUDYING MY degree I needED money because I HAD TO pay THE fees WHEN IT WAS THE last date,then I asked him FOR the money AND he arranged IT FOR ME. He is very important IN my life, and he gives THE best advise(0) TO me.
-(0) MOREOVER, he is a clEver (0) batsmen in cricket and HE IS always better than me.
-Now we (0) meet once A MONTH because he went FAR away