Monday, 28 May 2012

                                            MORE DAILY LIFE
           More lives in a big city.He wakes up at six to quarter every day ,then  refresh his self.He did complete break fast.Every day he goes to office by bus.He is working in a factory as a worker.He has a very unjust boss too,he always scolding to workers.He is a imaginative person . He is a inverter , he always imagine his childhood playing with friends.He is not happy.He uses old pieces of junk to make positive things.

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  1. Nice little text. Look at some comments:

    -quarter to six every day, then he refreshes himself. (CAREFUL WITH THIS SENTENCE!)

    he IS always scolding HIS workers.
    -He is aN imaginative person . He is aN invertOr , he always imagineS...

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