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Well done, Nagaraju!!!
Hi madam good evening.Now I am giving A small comment about THOSE WHO GAVE THEIR presentation today .
First of all I would like to thank(0) (0) Ramesh because AT THE end of the presentation he wrote my name.He DELIVERED HIS speech well and he did not get any nerves but sometimes he STOPPED thINKING about connecting words.
Finally Sasi and Surf gave THEIR speech about Poverty. I likeD Sasi because he easily involveD EVERYBODY. Surf is a practical man and he knows English well.
Well done, Nagaraju!!!
Hi madam good evening.Now I am giving A small comment about THOSE WHO GAVE THEIR presentation today .
First of all I would like to thank(0) (0) Ramesh because AT THE end of the presentation he wrote my name.He DELIVERED HIS speech well and he did not get any nerves but sometimes he STOPPED thINKING about connecting words.
Finally Sasi and Surf gave THEIR speech about Poverty. I likeD Sasi because he easily involveD EVERYBODY. Surf is a practical man and he knows English well.
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